28-01-2016, 03:17 AM
My name is Scott Kaiser, for sometime now I have been upset over my first book, I only blame myself. Nevertheless, I have taken that material and I have completely rewritten the entire book adding more than seventy pages. There is now a total of 321 pages. I now understand how it works, and the importance of evidence.
The purpose of my post is that I am seeking someone who is well educated and diverse in the English language, with a talent in editing, sentence structure, pronunciations and punctuations. Below, is some information culled directly out of page 63. My question to you is.
Would there be a person in this forum who would be up to the challenge of reviewing my [entire] PDF with the understanding that should you accept this, I have no money to pay you, any material sent your way [will not] be duplicated, copied, or otherwise shared with anyone. In other words, no material shall be disclosed unless this author has given you written permission. If you are the one chosen, then you are agreeing to these terms and will adhere to these conditions, please contact me.
Your name will not be given out, and this will be strictly and confidentially kept between us. I would also stress that time is of the essence as I plan on having this material sent out in March or sooner for publishers review.
Should you be interested, please send me a personal email at scott-kaiser@hotmail.com in turn, I will send you my entire PDF for review for specified corrections. Please title in the subject line "Book editing". Thanking everyone in advance.
Scott
"I can still remember the apartment we lived in, it was on the second floor in Anchorage, Alaska, and the two girls my mother babysitted, I knew them as Happy and Michelle. I suppose we named her Happy because she was. My mother had tinfoil wrapped all around the windows to keep the sunlight from overpowering the inside of our two bedroom apartment. I don't remember it ever getting too dark outside. One of my parents would always walk me in my snowshoes to the bus stop where I would be picked up for school. One evening there was a small tremor, my mother knew we were having an earthquake, but I had no idea what it was. I saw the dishes move in the Kitchen, and just like that, it was over. I looked at my mother and asked, who did that? She started to laugh. At night I loved to hear the wolves howl while watching a movie series on TV with my mom called Dark Shadows. I was only four then, and between the wolves, and the move show, they both gave me an excuse to always crawl in bed with my parents.
The winter weather in Alaska was more than Mom could bear. My sister and I were always getting sick, and Mom didn't have much help financially. My father didn't exactly help in taking care of us. I needed an ear operation according to my father, and the doctor suggested that it should be done in warmer climate. Dad called his mother who was living in Florida at the time and told her that the family was moving down there.
Paraphrase from Page Two of My Father's Letter:
After his death I moved to Alaska, then on one of my trips back to Connecticut I met and married my wife, this was in 1962, I have been married now eleven years. I have a son nine and a daughter four. Because of a operation on my sons ear we were advised to have it done in a warmer climate not in Alaska. My mother lived in Florida at that time so we moved from Alaska to Florida. The operation was performed in a hospital in Miami Beach and we have lived in that area for over four years now. It was then that I started getting wrapped up in the Cuban problems. Abraham Lincoln once said that "progress" true progress starts in your heart. The Cuban people not only had in their heart the cry for freedom, justice, a new democratic government in Cuba but also the cry for "progress" they knew that the Monroe Doctrine made by President Monroe, which was made to protect the Americans, North, South and central from infiltration from other government foreign and abroad was not Kennedy. I asked myself? Do I have to see New York, Chicago or Dallas Texas? Budapest, Algeria, Vietnam or even like that small island 90 miles off the coast of Florida run by a puppet with a beard in what is a mock drama presumably by the communist party for our benefit. Remembering what Joseph Stalin said, "what is mine is mine and what is yours is negotiable," what Nikita Khrushchev said in February holding up an ear of corn on Life magazine. We will not fight the United States man to man we will infiltrate the government, their schools, their churches, all this went through my mind, I did what I thought any American should do. I was not silent like the so called…"
ASSASSINS
A Man Without A Country
P.63
The purpose of my post is that I am seeking someone who is well educated and diverse in the English language, with a talent in editing, sentence structure, pronunciations and punctuations. Below, is some information culled directly out of page 63. My question to you is.
Would there be a person in this forum who would be up to the challenge of reviewing my [entire] PDF with the understanding that should you accept this, I have no money to pay you, any material sent your way [will not] be duplicated, copied, or otherwise shared with anyone. In other words, no material shall be disclosed unless this author has given you written permission. If you are the one chosen, then you are agreeing to these terms and will adhere to these conditions, please contact me.
Your name will not be given out, and this will be strictly and confidentially kept between us. I would also stress that time is of the essence as I plan on having this material sent out in March or sooner for publishers review.
Should you be interested, please send me a personal email at scott-kaiser@hotmail.com in turn, I will send you my entire PDF for review for specified corrections. Please title in the subject line "Book editing". Thanking everyone in advance.
Scott
"I can still remember the apartment we lived in, it was on the second floor in Anchorage, Alaska, and the two girls my mother babysitted, I knew them as Happy and Michelle. I suppose we named her Happy because she was. My mother had tinfoil wrapped all around the windows to keep the sunlight from overpowering the inside of our two bedroom apartment. I don't remember it ever getting too dark outside. One of my parents would always walk me in my snowshoes to the bus stop where I would be picked up for school. One evening there was a small tremor, my mother knew we were having an earthquake, but I had no idea what it was. I saw the dishes move in the Kitchen, and just like that, it was over. I looked at my mother and asked, who did that? She started to laugh. At night I loved to hear the wolves howl while watching a movie series on TV with my mom called Dark Shadows. I was only four then, and between the wolves, and the move show, they both gave me an excuse to always crawl in bed with my parents.
The winter weather in Alaska was more than Mom could bear. My sister and I were always getting sick, and Mom didn't have much help financially. My father didn't exactly help in taking care of us. I needed an ear operation according to my father, and the doctor suggested that it should be done in warmer climate. Dad called his mother who was living in Florida at the time and told her that the family was moving down there.
Paraphrase from Page Two of My Father's Letter:
After his death I moved to Alaska, then on one of my trips back to Connecticut I met and married my wife, this was in 1962, I have been married now eleven years. I have a son nine and a daughter four. Because of a operation on my sons ear we were advised to have it done in a warmer climate not in Alaska. My mother lived in Florida at that time so we moved from Alaska to Florida. The operation was performed in a hospital in Miami Beach and we have lived in that area for over four years now. It was then that I started getting wrapped up in the Cuban problems. Abraham Lincoln once said that "progress" true progress starts in your heart. The Cuban people not only had in their heart the cry for freedom, justice, a new democratic government in Cuba but also the cry for "progress" they knew that the Monroe Doctrine made by President Monroe, which was made to protect the Americans, North, South and central from infiltration from other government foreign and abroad was not Kennedy. I asked myself? Do I have to see New York, Chicago or Dallas Texas? Budapest, Algeria, Vietnam or even like that small island 90 miles off the coast of Florida run by a puppet with a beard in what is a mock drama presumably by the communist party for our benefit. Remembering what Joseph Stalin said, "what is mine is mine and what is yours is negotiable," what Nikita Khrushchev said in February holding up an ear of corn on Life magazine. We will not fight the United States man to man we will infiltrate the government, their schools, their churches, all this went through my mind, I did what I thought any American should do. I was not silent like the so called…"
ASSASSINS
A Man Without A Country
P.63