12-03-2012, 05:31 PM
What?
Speaking and writing nonsense are not commonly the choices of one possessed of deep poetic perceptions or deep political insights.
Before Picasso abstracted, he represented.
Before Coltrane ventured out, he mastered in.
If English is not your native tongue, I apologize for what would be my misplaced criticism.
If it is, you might wish to eschew the use of gibberish in your efforts to communicate -- unless, of course, such usage may be appreciated for its intended deeper dramatic and/or thematic functions.
As it stands, your runes are in ruins.
Speaking and writing nonsense are not commonly the choices of one possessed of deep poetic perceptions or deep political insights.
Before Picasso abstracted, he represented.
Before Coltrane ventured out, he mastered in.
If English is not your native tongue, I apologize for what would be my misplaced criticism.
If it is, you might wish to eschew the use of gibberish in your efforts to communicate -- unless, of course, such usage may be appreciated for its intended deeper dramatic and/or thematic functions.
As it stands, your runes are in ruins.