20-09-2013, 02:02 PM
John Mooney Wrote:Charles, your point is a semantic one.
It most certainly is not.
Your language in this instance is imprecise and as a consequence might misinform those who are not on familiar terms with the literature.
You wrote, "Armstrong came up with the doppleganger theory... " [emphasis added]
For the sake of accuracy and in service to overall clarity, you would have been well advised to write, "Armstrong came up with his doppelganger theory ... "
Thanks.