Evaluating the Case against LBJ

[Seamus Coogan]

Dawn makes some good points. There are some small mistakes and omissions. I had the initial job of coordinating the project. Essentially I put together all the stuff I had from other essays and discussions. Phil and Vas did much the same with Vasilios being the driving force. Reading the article though I'd like to go back over and do some more stuff with it. No disrespect to Vas, Phil and Jim. I found it didn't read very well in places, I think next time we do this, I think we need to coordinate a style. We're a bit all over show. I put this down to myself not having the time to go over it properly before I gave it to Jim. While my grammar at times is a source of amusement lol. I am pretty good at not being too repetitive in my sentences and I am okay at structure I.E beginning, middle and an end. I also have access to some pretty meticulous editors that could have really looked at it. Nonetheless, some pieces at CTKA are really up to the God's how they will come out. I still have some concerns over my MJ-12 piece. Deb's not 100 percent on the health front and Jim is often juggling other stuff. HTML takes a lot of time and full credit to Deb and CTKA volunteers. But if we had a bigger pool of helpers on the HTML front the quality of our articles could only improve and the smaller errors you mentioned could be ironed out.

All the same cheers to Vas for inspiring the piece and cheers to Phil for the additions he made. The DPF certainly represented well.